I would like to begin by saying that I think the melody here is completely badass and the rhythm is perfect. That being said, that's all that is really going on here. Changing the instrument carrying the melody is not a substantial variation on the music, and although the beginning is one of the most pulse-pounding pieces of music on Newgrounds, after two minutes the constant monotony of the music starts to wear on my patience. It just doesn't have enough musical content to justify a four-minute song. 10/10 for the music, -2/10 for the laziness not to add variety or the shortsightedness to realize that the song was too long for the four measures of melody. Like I said, I love the song, and it pains me to criticize so harshly, but I think you should have seen this comment coming.
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